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Flagship diagnostic

The Manuscript MRI

A 23-point structural and logic assessment of your manuscript — delivered before you submit, so you can fix what reviewers will flag before they flag it. A pre-flight checklist written by someone who has sat on both sides of the peer-review desk.

No ghostwriting, ever · Human-led, PhD-signed

For research offices

Buying for a department or lab?

We handle institutional invoicing, purchase orders and departmental packages by arrangement — no Stripe button, no card required up front.

Why this exists

Most rejections are not about the science.

They are about an argument a reader could not follow, a method a stranger could not rebuild, a limitation you did not name before a reviewer did, and a cover letter that gave an editor no reason to send the paper out. None of that requires new data — it is invisible to you because you have read this manuscript ninety times.

The MRI is that first-time reader — with a checklist, a score, and a written record of exactly what they would have said.

The deliverable

What you receive

Six artefacts, all of them yours to keep, forward to a co-author, or paste straight into a response letter.

  • 23-point structural, logical and rhetorical diagnostic

    Every checkpoint scored, evidenced with a page or line reference, and ranked by how much it moves your odds.

  • Colour-coded report (Green / Amber / Red)

    Twelve to eighteen pages. Colour is always paired with a G / A / R letter, so it works in greyscale and for colour-blind readers.

  • 15-minute private video walk-through

    Screen-share over your actual manuscript. Unlisted link, downloadable, no expiry.

  • “Reviewer #2” simulation

    The five most likely objections, written in reviewer voice, each with the rebuttal or revision that closes it.

  • Journal-fit analysis for up to 3 target venues

    Scope match, recent-issue precedent, format requirements, and an honest “don’t send it here” where that’s the answer.

  • Revised structure proposal, when re-architecting is needed

    A section-by-section skeleton of the paper this could be. Supplied only when the current architecture is the problem — we won’t invent work.

What it is not. The diagnostic is not a proofread, not a copy-edit, and not a rewrite. It does not touch your sentences; if you want them edited, The Language Pass below does that, by the same specialist, with every change recorded. Nobody here invents your arguments or puts words in your discussion section. Every recommendation is an instruction to you, in your voice, about your work.

The live report

What the 23 points cover

Below is a real, anonymised report. Select any checkpoint to see what we assess and what this particular manuscript was told.

Contribution stated in the first 150 words — Green — Whether a reader who stops after the first paragraph can state what you found and why it matters. Stated in sentence three of the abstract and restated in the introduction’s second paragraph. No action. Editors triage on the abstract. If the contribution is on page four, it does not exist.

Sample / Illustrative — reproduced from a real report with the client’s written permission. Titles, discipline and journal names removed.

Methodology

The “Human-Core” Framework™

  1. AI-powered diagnostic scan

    Tools surface structural friction, citation gaps, reporting-standard misses and readability collapse points. Every tool we used is named in your report.

  2. Specialist-led strategy session

    A PhD in or adjacent to your field reads the paper and the scan together, discards the false positives, and ranks what’s left by effect on your acceptance odds. Nothing ships unsigned.

  3. Reviewer #2 simulation

    We attack the paper from the position of the least generous plausible reviewer, write the objections in their voice, and hand you the answers before anyone else asks the questions.

Turnaround starts when we confirm receipt of a complete file, not at checkout. If your manuscript arrives without figures or a methods section, we’ll tell you within one working day rather than starting the clock.

Investment

One price, no retainer

€459

  • Colour-coded 23-point report (12–18 pages)
  • 15-minute private video walk-through
  • “Reviewer #2” simulation
  • Journal-fit analysis for up to 3 target venues
  • 5–7 day turnaround, up to 10,000 words

Optional add-ons

  • Rush 72-hour delivery€199
  • 30-minute post-delivery strategy call€99
  • The Language Pass — one pass of language editing, up to 10,000 words€299

Manuscripts over 10,000 words are quoted individually. Talk to us about an institutional purchase order, an invoice, or splitting the fee in two — we will set it up with you directly.

Add-on

The Language Pass — add €299

One pass of academic language editing, by the specialist who signed your diagnostic.

We edit text you wrote: grammar, syntax, tense and agreement, sentence clarity, the order of sentences inside a paragraph, terminology and notation consistency across the whole document, academic register, and reference formatting to your venue’s style. Choosing or replacing sources is not editing, and we do not do it.

What we never edit: your argument. The diagnostic tells you to move section 3 and says why. It does not move it for you. Where a change to the language would change what a sentence claims, we flag the question and you answer it.

Every altered sentence is recorded in a change log delivered with the pass, and your report carries the acknowledgements wording filled in. The declaration is written before anybody asks you for one.

€299. One pass, up to 10,000 words. Documents above the cap are quoted individually. A second pass over your own revisions is a second €299, because unlimited passes is how disclosed editing turns into co-writing over three rounds, and the drift is invisible from inside it.

Your editing date is confirmed in writing before the pass starts, and it is a separate date from your diagnostic delivery. A rush diagnostic does not make the editing rush.

Available with this diagnostic, and with Rejection Reversal or Grant Surge. Not sold on its own, and not available without a diagnostic on the same document. An editing-only enquiry gets a written answer within one working day, pointing you to services that do sell it.

Add it when you order

Language editing

Editing, by somebody who read the paper

Most scholars writing in English as a second language want two things, and the order matters. They want to know whether the argument holds. Then they want the English to stop getting in the way of it.

The diagnostic answers the first. The Language Pass answers the second, and the same named specialist does both.

That continuity is the whole of the difference, and you can check it without taking our word for anything. One name on the diagnostic. The same name on the change log.

What we edit: your sentences, your paragraphs, your terminology, your register. What we never edit: your argument. The diagnostic tells you to move section 3 and says why. It does not move it for you.

Every changed sentence is recorded. The report carries the acknowledgements wording filled in, so your declaration is written before anybody asks you for one.

The Language Pass is an add-on to a diagnostic and is not sold on its own. An editing-only enquiry gets a written answer within one working day, pointing you to services that do sell it.

The Fit Guarantee

If, after reviewing your file, we don’t believe the MRI is the right instrument for your paper, you get a full refund or a credited switch to a better-fitting service — decided within 24 hours of receipt, before any work begins.

After delivery, if the work misses the brief we agreed, tell us within 14 days and we revise it once, free. If the revision still misses it, half the fee comes back as a refund or a credit, your choice.

Non-negotiables

Four commitments we publish, so you can hold us to them

  • Human-Led Certification

    Every strategic decision is reviewed and signed by a PhD expert — never solely by an automated system.

  • Ethical AI Disclosure

    We disclose every tool used in your diagnostic. No hidden automation.

    Read the disclosure

  • Data Sovereignty

    Your intellectual property remains yours. We never use your work to train a model.

    How we handle your files

  • No Ghostwriting, Ever

    We nurture your voice. We never substitute your ideas with ours — and we will decline work that requests us to.

Before you submit

Find the four objections now, not in eleven weeks.

Not sure this is the right instrument? Send us the abstract and the rejection letter. We reply within 48 hours — including “you don’t need us for this,” when that’s the honest answer.